Wednesday, April 27, 2011

introverted. . . . in an extroverted world

*this poem is dedicated to my many fellow journeyers on this path called "motherhood". . .
and especially those who woke up one day and realized that their quiet,
peaceful world had been a little--well--interrupted, by those of a type a bit more
exuberant, a bit more rowdy, or simply with a need for more n.o.i.s.e.
i can relate.
and here is my ode, to you and to me.
it's also dedicated to the kids of those moms.  those kids who are learning great life lessons in
how to deal with those a bit different from themselves. . . . a bit quieter than themselves.
and blessed are those kids who figure out how to help mama rejuvenate along the way.




[introverted. . . . . in an extroverted world]


four—such a nice round number
but, obviously, ne’er stopped to wonder
the noise they’d produce
ripe fruit, dripping juice
my solace, completely plundered..


sometimes i just sit in amazement, 
((never mind really wishing a basement)) 
their mouths just go ON 
birds singing their song 
wishing, just a moment, for complacence.


what is an introvert, mama?
“a life, ever punctuated with comma,” 
befuddled gazes 
minds off to the races 
to understand this mother enigma.



I once told the story of a car
who really couldn’t get very far
kept losing its gas
getting sucked out fast
by the drivers who ran it too hard.


so now all the sad kids know
that mama’s car sometimes can’t go,
but give her some time
in the chair, making rhyme
and then she’ll be good to go!








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14 thoughts put into words. . .:

  1. ha. ok not a mother but having 2 boys i understand...i love how their mind works and yeah sometimes a break is def what is needed to get the car back in gear...great form and rhyme scheme as well...

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  2. I know you poem involves a mother and child relationship and interaction, but I couldn't help relating to the title and feeling that way myself and questioning it on a personal level. Nice poem.

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  3. yeah - nice flow to this poem - great theme too.

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  4. to contemplate motherhood...so much more deep within 'mom' searching for bonding with her child and at the same time questioning the subtle flow of love which evolves between all the noise and chaos..."but give her some time" sweet mama, if only she had the time...and the minutes rush into hours and the hours transform into memories of holding a little body so in need of being cradled against yours...a lovely deeply felt poem...beautiful writing...

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  5. Since I have little ones, I completely relate to their everlasting extroverted vivacity. Thank you for sharing!

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  6. thank you for your very special sensitive words about motherhood and the strong unbreakable connection between mother and child...you carry the hearts of children knowing so well how delicate interactions are...the differences and unique qualities each child beholds...and how children can be guided to understand those who are different, quiet and unable to freely express themselves...a lovely poem...thank you for this one...

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  7. Cute. I definitely know the feeling of valuing - nay, needing - introvert time, but have not learned the art of demanding it. Way to go.

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  8. In parenthood, as in life in general, one can't just stay swinging on the swing forever; one has to get off and rest, whether intentionally, via one of those death-defying mid-swing jumps, or (not recommended) by falling off!

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  9. Oh yes . . . just to have a potty break in peace is wonderful, isn't it?!?!? :) Thank you for sharing!

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  10. I really enjoyed your poem, I'm quite familiar with the theme (and accompanying noise), made me smile. Glad you took the time to make your rhyme! :) Very nice!

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  11. my solace, completely plundered..

    oh friend, that's how i feel tonight... my little boy isn't four yet but man can he get into everything! and another little boy on the way. :) i loved this poem, loved it. brilliant.

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  12. I love this...especially as a mom of a boy who simply cannot be quiet. :)

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  13. Thanks for all the thoughtful comments. . . insightful. . . encouraging. And for those comments that didn't appear--well, there are younger readers of this blog, and while I can handle your artistic and colorful commentary, there were just a couple of things I didn't want to have to explain quite yet.

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  14. you know, this poem was just plain fun. I love your message, but it was also fun. "my solace completely plundered", I love people, love to hang out and chat, but when I need my alone time, I pity the one who denies it to me. Just not pleasant. Car illustration was nice, too.

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